Its.... ok
Problem is, it was hard to understand what you were saying at parts. Also, the animation was of a very low grade, so it was hard to see what was going on. But, you are new, so I'll cut you some slack. Take some art classes, and get a bit better at drawing ok? Once you can draw and animate well, people will want to voice act for you. Your scores will see a definite increase. :)
Erik.